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“If you feel you’ve agreed, then you’ve agreed,” Asai Yu replied.

This shift in affections means that now it's not so much about him wanting to kidnap Hachiman Kairin, but rather about Hachiman Kairin trying to trick him into bed.

"What...what is all this about?!" Yutenji Wakanai grabbed her hair in frustration.

To be honest, she came here specifically to see Asai Yu.

After learning that this guy was the one who saved her sister, she dreamed about him every night for the past month.

Before her career was stable enough, Yutenji Wakana never imagined that she would fall in love with someone else.

Moreover, it wasn't just a normal liking; he dreamed about Asai Yu for a whole month straight, and even said that in his dreams, the two of them were already married.

She even spent all her savings on him.

Therefore, even though this guy is Toyokawa Shoko's fiancé, he is also Wakaba Mutsumi's lover.

She still decided to give it a shot.

No, it should be said that we should fight to the very end!

Just then, the apartment door was suddenly opened.

Turning around, I saw a blue-haired girl—Toyokawa Shoko.

"Yu, what are you doing running out there?"

She asked somewhat displeased, "Anyway, come in first."

“And you two too.” She looked at Hachiman Kairin and Yutenji Wakana beside her and said.

After being pulled into the entryway, Asai Yu said somewhat helplessly, "Can't I go out for some fresh air?"

"Of course, no problem, I can help you."

As soon as she finished speaking, Toyokawa Shoko's lips curled into a smile, and then she pressed her face against his.

In front of the two Mujica members behind him.

Seeing this, Hachiman Kairin and Yutenji Wakanagi exchanged glances, looking at each other in bewilderment.

Should we kiss them right in front of them?

Is this... not a good thing?

However, seeing Toyokawa Shoko leading Asai U towards the living room, the two quickly followed.

They initially thought the two on the sofa were just kissing briefly.

However, what happened next completely shattered their worldviews that they had built up over many years.

From the moment two people did that kind of thing in front of them, to the moment they came out of the upstairs rooms one by one to join in.

Finally, they witnessed almost the entire chaotic melee.

Yawata Kairin remained in a stagnant state.

Yutenji Wakanagi was stunned, but quickly adapted to the situation.

It's so messy, even if another person sneaks in, no one will notice.

With a spirit of fighting to the end, Yutenji Wakana did not hesitate and joined in directly.

Of course, she didn't forget to drag Hachiman Kairin, who had come with her, along, so that if a conviction were to be made, she could also take the blame.

Asai Yu also noticed the two who had suddenly joined them.

He leaned close to Toyokawa Shoko's ear, which was pressed against his face, and whispered, "What's going on?"

"I'm willing to help you get whatever you want."

Toyokawa Shoko smiled and answered softly.

It seems that Xiangzi had always intended to drag these two down with him.

Now there are two more people.

Will I be able to leave this apartment?

Turning to look out the window, Asai Yu realized that it was already dark.

Wasn't it still morning just now?

No, it seems like... a day has already passed.

Asai Yu felt that his biological clock had gone completely out of control.

No, this can't go on.

However, just as he tried to get up, he was pushed back down.

He's doomed to be smitten by this group of teenage girls in the band.

Forget it, so be it.

In the end, Asai Yu gave up completely.

I chose to succumb to the gentle embrace of this band of young girls.

The End.

Chapter 333 Author's Closing Remarks (See this)

First of all, thank you to all the readers who have been following this book all the way. Your support is my motivation for writing. Thank you so much.

Next, let's talk about this book.

The main point is to address the problems exposed by this book.

Before I started writing this book, I had already written the outline of the whole book and a detailed outline as well. I thought that as long as I filled it in, there would be no problem.

My goal at the time was to finish the story in about one million words.

While it has indeed been achieved, it collapsed quite badly in the mid-to-late stages.

The biggest reason for this is probably that the pace was too fast in the early stages.

I managed to write about the experiences of the three female protagonists, Toyokawa Shoko, Chihaya Aine, and Wakaba Mutsu, in less than 200,000 words.

Actually, I originally planned to end my experience with Motoyo Nagasaki.

According to my original outline, the plot should have reached the later stages, around 700,000 to 800,000 words, where the protagonist starts meeting the female lead, and finally they all meet, ending after a chaotic love triangle.

However, because the plot of the first three female protagonists was too fast-paced, the story of Nagasaki Motoyo was introduced earlier, when the story was only around 400,000 words long.

It's far from my original one million-word outline.

However, as the plot has progressed to this stage, I couldn't stop the male and female leads from meeting, so I started the love triangle ahead of time.

But since there wasn't much left to write, I added more scenes for the two Sumimi characters, and also added a life experience for Shiina Tatsuki, which dragged it out to a million words.

In the end, it barely managed to fill the gaps in the story of Takamatsu Akari, Hachiman Kairin, and Yutenji Wakamu, but fortunately, there was some foreshadowing in the beginning, so it was still passable.

This is a problem with the overall pacing, and it's also my biggest problem. The storylines of the female leads in the early stages should have been lengthened and the content enriched.

Then there are some plot issues in the middle.

The main storyline revolves around the two idols, Sumimi, including rescuing Misaki Miku from the island and saving Mana Junta from jumping into the water a second time.

Actually, the outline I gave to these two female protagonists before I started the book already included these two storylines, and both of them ended with the romantic storylines.

However, my plot may not be coherent enough, and I didn't write it smoothly enough. The pacing was not stable enough, which resulted in the writing not being good enough. I will pay more attention to this in the future.

And finally, the issue of the protagonist's human-machine interaction.

Let alone you readers, even I felt a sense of being read by a machine.

The protagonist's initiative is entirely driven by the system's mission rewards, and he becomes an emotionless android when interacting with the female protagonists.

It was alright in the early stages, but it completely turned into a game against bots in the mid-to-late game, and then it improved a bit in the very late game.

I feel terrible when I read my own books. Almost no one would like a protagonist like that, and I will never write a protagonist like that again.

I will correct all the above problems in my next book.

That's right, I've already conceived my next book and written the outline. If any readers are interested, please keep an eye out for it. I'll post a chapter about the book to promote it when it's released.

As for the timing, the book will probably be released this month.

Finally, thank you again to all the readers who have supported us along the way!